Between the lines

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Tuesday, 12-Feb-2008 1:13:32

Sitting here writing out the rules for you.
You know the ones where you can't look at me with those eyes.
Your body can't call at night for mine.

Can you read between the lines?
I love you, I want you.
Can you read between the lines?

You can't make me feel the way you do, driving me crazy out of the blue.
You can't come find me in my dreams, to watch me wile I sleep

Can you read between the lines?
come touch me, I'm waiting.
Can you read between the lines?

You can't have me in that way that melts the hours of the day
You can't wake with me in the morning light.

Can you read between the lines
I need you come free me
Can you read between the lines

Words are clearly written out across my naked soul.
Nothings hidden in the atmosphere.
If you look, you can see me there,

in between the lines.
Come find me
In between the lines

Post 2 by PorkInCider (Wind assisted.) on Tuesday, 12-Feb-2008 12:06:58

Wow Maria! Another great peace of writing.

Post 3 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 12-Feb-2008 12:15:43

that's deep, Maria

Post 4 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Tuesday, 12-Feb-2008 20:16:08

Well, Not so good. You can improve. It just doesn't sound right. So... off you go, fix up time!